Please Take a Look

Im a wannabe sports Journo and have started to write reports on the games.
This is my first one ... please take a look and comment please.

http://allthingscardiff.blogspot.com/20 ... ch-12.html

I like it well done

very good.. well done, and good luck

Im a wannabe sports Journo and have started to write reports on the games.
This is my first one ... please take a look and comment please.

http://allthingscardiff.blogspot.com/20 ... ch-12.html

In all honesty , if you really are thinking of a future in journalism , you are going to have to work far harder on your English.

Random capital letters in your thread title and in the body of your "report" , poor punctuation and spelling ( e.g.its "losing" not "loosing") and the use of nicknames in the body of the report are all issues that would have your sports editor tearing his hair out (or more likely yours!) if that was presented to him for review.